tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post7694712695951442085..comments2023-10-02T06:53:35.671-06:00Comments on Wonder of Words: THE WRITER'S VOICE: DEVIL'S PLAYGROUNDHeather Eagarhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08106309120545105649noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-62457806423397494212015-05-26T16:48:52.582-06:002015-05-26T16:48:52.582-06:00I enjoyed this and would read on. Love the line --...I enjoyed this and would read on. Love the line -- "It doesn’t matter much when my choices are the black dress, the dark black dress, or the other black dress."<br /><br />Great voice! Good luck in the competition and thanks for sharing.Don McFatridgehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13554281247528998061noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-22964954298807183832015-05-23T21:56:04.083-06:002015-05-23T21:56:04.083-06:00Great job! I love the premise with her living in S...Great job! I love the premise with her living in Salem, being a witch, but not knowing much about magic. Best of luck in the contest :)Michelle Merrillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00040685503147648297noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-63571376012324340862015-05-22T15:41:27.943-06:002015-05-22T15:41:27.943-06:00Thanks everyone! Yes, I am on twitter. @haeagar. Thanks everyone! Yes, I am on twitter. @haeagar. Heather Eagarhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08106309120545105649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-82443271062160738912015-05-22T15:20:21.191-06:002015-05-22T15:20:21.191-06:00Good luck in the competition! (Are you on Twitter...Good luck in the competition! (Are you on Twitter, btw?)Annette T. Doddhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13153366966746537614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-7129009923257559352015-05-22T09:30:46.954-06:002015-05-22T09:30:46.954-06:00I love the twist on an actual historical event you...I love the twist on an actual historical event you've taken here. So unique! Good Luck!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-75501878366596951402015-05-21T20:49:38.932-06:002015-05-21T20:49:38.932-06:00Hmm. The black one. The dark black one. Or the...
...Hmm. The black one. The dark black one. Or the...<br /><br />Clever. Funny.<br /><br />Have you considered snipping the first sentence of your query? I think it sounds stronger starting at the second sentence.<br /><br />Good luck. Lovely writing!Ellen Mulhollandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17978299715941154306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5315325986067576228.post-8895342697170528912015-05-21T13:58:47.669-06:002015-05-21T13:58:47.669-06:00This sounds so good! I love the idea of a Salem wi...This sounds so good! I love the idea of a Salem witch trials story where the accused are actual witches. Good luck in the contest!Taylorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03399325280621691112noreply@blogger.com